Temperamental Magic

I.

Peeking behind clouds,
Welcoming sun glowed warmly,
Sunlight, shining rays.

II.

Lake shore lines lower,
Remaining water, ebbing,
Draught caught on early.

III.

Quiet tower loomed,
Clock hands stopped ages ago,
Under gloomy day.

IV.

Sky, raindrops falling,
Drip, slick, slide, pelting away,
Down into puddle.

V.

Time passed silently,
Eternal changing weather,
Temperamental.


My first attempt on Haiku, I’ve read about the syllable rules and thought of painting the weather with words. Any critiques/comments/feedback is very appreciated, please let me know what you think 🙂

In response to this week’s Stellar and Lunar Challenge Roundup #17 (Sep 10) with the prompt: Magic. This week we come back from space travel to appreciate the uniqueness of our planet Earth ❤

Stellar and Lunar Challenge is hosted by Sarah once a week every Thursday on her blog tuckedintoacorner.